Thank you for your kind words. Your note is very lovely but grammatically fucked in the ass with a bottle brush (brackets within parentheses do indeed work (“parentheses” is another word for “brackets”), but you only need to put one bracket in at a time (when you’re using a bracket within a bracket (or a parenthesis within a parenthesis)). Always remember to end your parenthesizing/bracketing ventures with exactly the same amount of brackets you begun with. Under no circumstances may you have more, and definitely never any less (if you’re paying attention you’ll notice there are currently two sets of unclosed brackets in this paragraph) (but not any more!)).
Neat, tidy and clean (but very confusing when smiley faces ( : ) ) or frowny faces ( : ( ) are involved) parentheses are a truly wonderful grammatical tool (because you can put sentences within sentences (and sentences within those sentences (you get the idea?).).). It’s also very important to note that punctuation (for example full stops or question marks) are placed AFTER the closing parenthesis (or bracket) because the sentence cannot finish before the bracket does (because a sentence within brackets standing alone, not already IN a sentence doesn’t make any sense at all (because why on earth would you need brackets around a sentence that wasn’t already in a sentence (that’s the whole point of brackets, right?)?).).
Are you feeling me sister?

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September 29, 2008 at 15:13
SamWise
Hey Luke!
I like this one a lot. But I’m using it as a place to write about the others too.
I like your agoraphobic poem a lot. Maybe if all the sentences are short and punchy it would give the reader more of a feeling of being boxed in? Otherwise it was punchy and good.
In Rainbows reminded me of watching Yellow Submarine.
You do what I do with my writing. I tend to state the obvious when I shouldn’t… I get worried that people don’t know what I’m getting at, but that is underestimating the fact that everyone brings something to a piece of writing anyway, so it’s best to just give them the skeleton and let them fill in the flesh… if you know what I mean.
You should make these into zines… the zine world drastically lacks fiction!!
Anyway… I finally got a chance to concentrate on the screen for an extended period of time!
Hope you’re feeling well elated now James is there with ya! (I read status updates)…
Respect, y’all! Word.
- Sam